From 759e1c69e25c60260cdd0193f429bd18a490d721 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Rijackson Date: Sun, 30 Sep 2018 15:06:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Some English fixes --- AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford.json | 4 ++-- .../res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford_combined.json | 6 +++--- AndorsTrail/res/raw/questlist_stoutford_combined.json | 6 +++--- 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford.json b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford.json index bb9e222f1..d4f75bf01 100644 --- a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford.json +++ b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford.json @@ -1438,7 +1438,7 @@ ] }, { - "text":"Yolgen told me that you could provide me some artefact against powerful undead.", + "text":"Yolgen told me that you could provide me with an artefact that could be used against powerful undead.", "nextPhraseID":"tahalendor_erwyn_1", "requires":[ { @@ -1523,7 +1523,7 @@ }, { "id":"tahalendor_erwyn_2", - "message":"Most undead can be destroyed quite easily, but there is a rare and powerful kind where it is not so easy.", + "message":"Most undead can be destroyed quite easily, but there is a rare and powerful kind that are much more difficult to permanently destroy.", "replies":[ { "text":"N", diff --git a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford_combined.json b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford_combined.json index 2285cbb2c..31e302b22 100644 --- a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford_combined.json +++ b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/conversationlist_stoutford_combined.json @@ -11038,7 +11038,7 @@ }, { "id":"stn_colonel_310", - "message":"Stop! You do not have permission to withdraw already. Go back to the fights.", + "message":"Stop! You do not have permission to withdraw now. Go back to the fight.", "switchToNPC":"stn_colonel" }, { @@ -11182,7 +11182,7 @@ "nextPhraseID":"stn_horse_30" }, { - "text":"You are become gradually annoying. I'm leaving now.", + "text":"You are becoming gradually more annoying. I'm leaving now.", "nextPhraseID":"X" } ] @@ -11564,6 +11564,6 @@ }, { "id":"blornvale_thorns72_92", - "message":"No more words. Go now!" + "message":"No more talk. Go now!" } ] \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/questlist_stoutford_combined.json b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/questlist_stoutford_combined.json index fe2331474..c39164b8c 100644 --- a/AndorsTrail/res/raw/questlist_stoutford_combined.json +++ b/AndorsTrail/res/raw/questlist_stoutford_combined.json @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ }, { "progress":32, - "logText":"I decided not to help Aryfola any further.", + "logText":"I decided not to help Aryfora any further.", "rewardExperience":500, "finishesQuest":1 }, @@ -645,11 +645,11 @@ }, { "progress":12, - "logText":"I should ask Tahalendor for some special artefact against powerful undead." + "logText":"I should ask Tahalendor for some special artefact that I can use to defeat powerful undead." }, { "progress":14, - "logText":"Tahalendor gave me a pair of special coins against powerful undead." + "logText":"Tahalendor gave me a pair of special coins that I can use to defeat powerful undead." }, { "progress":20,